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IndlægEmne: The Unexpected   Tors aug 21, 2008 4:12 pm

Hej allesammen Very Happy

Så er jeg efterhånden kommet i gang med min nye fic, og som I nok kan se, hedder den:
The Unexpected Razz - Og den er på engelsk.

I får lige en lille indledning Wink - Første afsnit kommer d. 26 Very Happy

The Unexpected


They are in the same school, even same classes, but they have never talked.
She is the kind of nerdy girl, living in her own little world and only having few friends.
He is the popular guy, with all the friends and who parties all night long.
What happens, when two different people meet under the right circumstances and everything turns to the unexpected?


Haha, det var så det ! Very Happy
I må ikke forvente at jeg kan lægge afsnit ind så tit som med min tidligere fic, da jeg som sagt er startet i 1g og har travlt med lektier osv. Men jeg skal nok gøre et forsøg Very Happy !

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tors aug 21, 2008 4:33 pm

Uhh, lyder spændende Smile Glæder mig til den 26 !

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tors aug 21, 2008 7:02 pm

McFlyLover<3 skrev:
Uhh, lyder spændende Smile Glæder mig til den 26 !

Ogs mig !

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tors aug 21, 2008 7:10 pm

Det lyder skam spændende annesteg! Very Happy
Jeg glæder mig sørme også til den 26!
Og ikke kun fordi jeg har fødselsdag der, haha (;

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tors aug 21, 2008 7:10 pm

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Det lyder skam spændende annesteg! Very Happy
Jeg glæder mig sørme også til den 26!
Og ikke kun fordi jeg har fødselsdag der, haha (;


Haha, det er godt Razz <3

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Fre aug 22, 2008 11:53 am

ja det lyder rigtig godt. :b
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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tirs aug 26, 2008 5:22 pm

Så er første del på banen. Jeg håber virkelig I kan lide den Razz

Chapter 1


‘Great, first day of school and I’m already late!’ She thought to herself as she walked in to the school. This was so unlike her, she would always be on time. So why would the first time, be the first day of senior year? The most important year of her life so far, and it starts with her being late. Well, that’s just great! Hannah was the nerdy girl in school. Well, not a total geek of course, but she was definitely not an insider. She cared about school and her grades and that is what mattered at this point.
Hannah walked down the empty hallway. Should she knock before entering the classroom? She didn’t know. Why didn’t she pay attention when someone else was late? Because she knew that it would never be her! Or at least, that was what she thought. Just as she was standing outside the door, she heard someone else being late as well. She looked to her left and saw ‘Mr. Popular’ walking slowly towards her. She was not going to enter the classroom with him, so she decided to walk in there by her self.
“Well well, who do we have here?” said her English teacher, as she entered the room. “Great start of senior year, Miss Lewis. Please take a seat.” He nodded at the only free seat, and she quietly sat down.

Harry Judd aka ‘Mr. Popular’ was late for school. As he walked down the hallway, he saw something very unusual: Hannah Lewis outside their classroom as if she was late - which was kind of weird, because she is never late. Harry looked at her and felt something. He didn’t know what it was, but it was a feeling that never had appeared before. He followed her inside the classroom and sat down a couple of rows behind her. Her brown slightly curled hair was placed perfectly down her back. She was beautiful. Even though he hadn’t looked at her properly, he just knew that her face would be even prettier than the back of her. Why was he thinking about her like this? He had a girlfriend, Tiana. Her blond hair and long legs was always driving him crazy. She was hot! But there was something about her that he couldn’t figure out. They never had anything to talk about, and when they were alone together, they would always be making out. As if that was the only thing she was dating him for. But Hannah, there was something about her. Something that made him feel weird.

The bell rang and everyone got up, heading towards the door.
“Mr. Judd and Miss Lewis, I’ll see you in detention this afternoon” the teacher said and looked directly at them.
Well, first day of school and I’m already trying something new, Hannah thought to herself as she walked out of the classroom and to her locker.
“Hey Hannah-babe!” she heard someone say. She turned around and faced he best friend Sydney.
“Hey Sydney-girl!” she answered and put her books in her locker.
“So do you wanna hang out after school?” Sydney asked with a smile on her face. Hannah had always thought Sydney was really pretty, and Hannah knew that she was no where near that herself. Sydney on the other hand, kept telling her the opposite. She was always telling Hannah how pretty she was.
“Sorry, I can’t. I’m in detention!”
“You’re what?!” Sydney’s jaw dropped a bit.
“You heard me; I was late today, which is so unlike me. I don’t know what went wrong this morning.”
“Well, good luck then” she laughed. “I’ll just see you tomorrow right?”
“Definitely...” Hannah smiled.

Hannah walked down the hall and stopped in front of the classroom where detention where held. Inside a boy was sitting, playing something on his guitar. She loved the sound of a guitar and slowly opened the door. As soon as she entered the classroom, he started singing too.

Hey Jude, don’t make it bad.
Take a sad song and make it better.
Remember to let her into your heart,
Then you can start to make it better.


Hannah recognised the song as The Beatles, which she loved. She sat down by a table and just listened to the boy who was playing. His hair was bright and he was only a slight bit choppy. Hannah thought he looked cute, and he had a beautiful voice. She closed her eyes, and just enjoyed the music. Hannah heard the door open, but still sat with her eyes closed and listened to the music.

As soon as Harry opened the door to detention, he heard a familiar song, which he could relate to. Some boy was playing on his guitar and singing too.

Hey Jude, don’t let me down.
You have found her, now go and get her.
Remember to let her into your heart,
Then you can start to make it better.


He needed to do something about this Hannah thing. He couldn’t just let her go. He saw her sitting in a chair, facing the green grass outside the window.
Her face was reflected in the window, and he could see how beautiful she was. Her dark hair framed her angelic face perfectly. Should he go talk to her? Harry sighed; he didn’t know what to do.
Suddenly Hannah turned around and faced him. Her piercing blue eyes looked right into his, but then just as he was about to smile, she turned away and walked right over to the guy who was playing guitar. Harry felt his stomach turning. This couldn’t be happening. Why would she talk to that guy, when he was about to talk to her?

God, that guy has the most beautiful eyes Hanna had ever seen, how come she had never noticed that? Oh yeah, because he had never laid eyes on her before! That thought made her uncomfortable and she decided to talk to the guy with the guitar.
“Hi, you are pretty good.” She said, and sat down next to him.
“Thanks” He looked at her. “I’m Tom”.
“Hannah..” She smiled. “So, are you new here? I haven’t really seen you before..” Hannah asked.
“Yeah, well not exactly. I started just before spring break”
“Weird I haven’t noticed you before then..” Hannah laughed a little. “Well, I better get started on my homework.”
“Yeah, I should do that too.” He smiled. Hannah noticed only one dimple appearing on his cheek. ‘Cute’ she thought to herself, as she walked back to the table, she was sitting at before.


Dedicated to Sarah, TILLYKKE MED FØDSELSDAGEN! cheers <3

Hvad synes I så ?

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tirs aug 26, 2008 8:56 pm

Lyder til at blive en ret så god fic Very Happy Jeg vil i hvert fald gerne læse mere!!

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tirs aug 26, 2008 9:19 pm

McFlyLover<3 skrev:
Lyder til at blive en ret så god fic Very Happy Jeg vil i hvert fald gerne læse mere!!

Ja, jeg er også helt frisk på et til afsnit eller 10 .. Razz

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tors aug 28, 2008 10:11 pm

haha tak smukke! Razz
men jeg synes i hvert fald det er super godt <3
meget anderledes end den anden, men det jo helt fino! (:
jeg glæder mig til at læse meget mere! fuldstændig, hehe

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Fre aug 29, 2008 7:04 pm

god jaa Very Happy
glæder mig også til mere
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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Fre aug 29, 2008 7:39 pm

Ja det er bare super godt! :b mere snart.
Rigtig god start.
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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn aug 31, 2008 12:26 pm

Hvornår får vi mere? Very Happy<3

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn aug 31, 2008 4:41 pm

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Hvornår får vi mere? Very Happy<3


Haha, er man lidt utålmodig? Razz

Ej, jeg regner med mere senere iaften Smile

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn aug 31, 2008 5:26 pm

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sarahXlovesXmcfly skrev:
Hvornår får vi mere? Very Happy<3


Haha, er man lidt utålmodig? Razz

Ej, jeg regner med mere senere iaften Smile


Okay, glæder mig så Smile

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