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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn aug 31, 2008 7:22 pm

Her er så et nyt afsnit til jer Razz
- Håber i kan lide det (;


Chapter 2


Harry couldn’t sleep that night, he kept thinking about Hannah. He needed to do something about these feelings, but then again. How come he had these feelings for her, when they had never talked? That was the first thing he needed to do, talk to her. He could do that, it wasn’t hard just to say ‘hi’, or could it?
Harry woke up the next morning, smiling. He knew today was going to be a great day; he was going to talk to Hannah for the first time. He got up, took a shower and got dressed.
“What’s up with you today?” Harry’s mother asked as he entered the kitchen.
“What do you mean? I don’t feel different!” He asked, even though he knew that he had changed.
“You’re smiling. You usually just frown in the morning.”
“Well, maybe I need a little change.” He took an apple from the fruit bowl and headed towards the door. “I’m of to school.”

Hannah walked down the hallway and saw Sydney by the door. She waved at her and smiled.
“So how was detention?” Sydney asked with a smile.
“If was fine, I just did my homework and talked to the others.” Hannah answered and looked down the hall. She saw Tom standing alone and she waved him over.
“Who’s that?” Sydney whispered as Tom made his way over to them.
“That’s Tom, I met him yesterday in detention.” Hannah smiled at Tom. “Hi”
“Hi girls” he smiled and looked at Sydney.
“I’m Sydney” she said and they shook hands.
“Tom..” he answered. Hannah noticed that Sydney’s cheeks turned a light fade of pink when their hands met.
“Well, I better get to class. I’ve heard that they have a surprise for all seniors.” He began to walk away, but then turned around again. “Nice meeting you Sydney!” He smiled and his cute little dimple appeared on his cheek.
“Well, I’m of to class too. I’ll see you later, sweets?
“Sure, see you later sugar!” Hannah answered and smiled. They always had nicknames for each other.

Harry saw Hannah standing in the hallway. She was talking to some girl and the guy from yesterday. He wanted to be him; he wanted to talk to Hannah just like that guy did. Harry saw the girl and boy walking away, and leaving Hannah alone by her locker. Now was the right time to talk to her. He began making his way over to Hannah. Her back was facing him. Just when he was a few feet away, he heard a familiar voice.
“Hey babe!” Harry turned around and saw Tiana walking towards him. God, why did she have to be here, just when he was about to speak to Hannah?
“Hi T..” he mumbled and kissed her cheek. Sometimes she was just a bit too much.
“Can I come over tonight?” she asked exited and threw her arms around his neck.
“Of course!” Harry tried to sound exited, just to play along with her.
“Great, honey. I can’t wait.” She winked and walked away. That was their meaningful conversation of the day. Harry just couldn’t take this anymore. He needed to do something about it. He needed someone else, someone he could talk properly to, someone that would understand and care for him. That’s when he realised, he needed Hannah.

Hannah walked to class and saw Harry and his blond girlfriend, Tiana being really gross with their kissing and hugging. Hannah hated when people was like this in public. Why couldn’t people just do this at home?
She sat down at her usual table and opened her Spanish books. This was her third year of Spanish and she loved it. Harry entered the room and smiled at her. Or did he? Was it just something she imagined or did he smile to someone behind her? Hannah just looked the other way and ignored him.
“Hola” their teacher said as she entered the classroom. “How are everyone today?” She sounded really exited.
“Fine..” the class mumbled.
“Okay, so today we are skipping Spanish, because the teachers have a surprise for you. These next couple of weeks you are going to learn how to dance!” The teacher sounded exited, but most of the class frowned. Hannah didn’t really care, she loved to dance, but she would also like to keep her classes. After all, this was an important year. She had to graduate.
“We have invited professional dance teachers to train you and when you have learned the dances, we will have a show for the entire school and your parents.” Hannah had always wanted to be in a dance show, and a big smile grew upon her face as the teacher continued. “You will be in pairs and you partner is someone from the class you are in right now.” Hannah sighed in relief. Thank God, Tiana wasn’t in the class. Then she wouldn’t see her and Harry being all over each other all the time. She really couldn’t stand when people was like this.
“Okay, so I’m gonna read the pairs to you and we will start afterwards. Marissa and Clark, Louise and James, Sarah and Josh..“ Hannah didn’t pay attention until she heard her name being mentioned. “And last but not least, Hannah and Harry..” Hannah’s jaw dropped. It was bad enough to see Harry and Tiana together, but she did not want to dance with Harry; an ass that never had noticed her. In all these years she had been to this school and he had never looked at her once. Not because she wanted him to, but he could at least act like she existed.

As soon as the teacher announced that Harry would be dancing with Hannah, his heart started beating really fast. Not only was he going to talk to her, he was also going to dance with her. This made him so happy.
“Well, let’s get started everyone!” Their teacher was really exited about this dancing thing, and Harry knew he was too. At first he wasn’t really into it, but then Hannah came along and changed his mind.
Everyone got up and headed towards the gym, where they would be dancing.
“Everyone pair up, please!” Some strange woman yelled. People started pairing up, but Harry hesitated. Hannah didn’t know him; she didn’t know that he had feelings for her. Should he just say hi, or what do you do when you talk to someone for the first time. Before Harry could do anything, his thoughts were interrupted.
“Hi” Hannah said and looked like she had better things to do.
“Hey..” Harry answered. Why was he this nervous? It’s just a girl. Oh, shut up Harry, he thought to himself. Hannah isn’t just some girl.
“Hello everyone!” the woman yelled again. “My name is Natasha and I will be your dance teacher for these next couple of weeks. Now, I have some helpers here with me, and they will be showing you what to do, and then I will be directing you while you are dancing. This is Jennifer and Shane, just in case you need help with something.”

“Now, I’m gonna put on some music and then I want you to dance. It doesn’t have to be with you partner, but we need to see how much rhythm you have and such.” Natasha started the music and people began to dance. Hannah did not want to dance in front of Harry. She looked to her right, and saw Tiana making some disgusting dance moves. What does Harry even see in her? Hannah never figured that out.
“You need to dance, sweetie.” Natasha said. She now stood in front of Hannah, who weren’t dancing. Harry stood still as well, just looking at her. Harry held out his hand, but Hannah ignored it and started swaying to the music by herself.

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn aug 31, 2008 8:37 pm

rigtig godt hehe glæder mig til mere Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Man sep 01, 2008 4:40 pm

Rigtig godt ! Glæder mig også til mere Wink

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Man sep 01, 2008 7:03 pm

Ej jeg synes at det er en rigtig sød historie Very Happy
glæder mig til der kommer mere.
jeg er selv ved at skrive min første fic, så håber i tager godt imod den når jeg får den lagt ud Very Happy
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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Man sep 01, 2008 7:05 pm

Jeg glæder mig også til at høre mere ..

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Tirs sep 02, 2008 4:26 pm

jeg glæder mig skam også til mere (:
- det er rigtig godt, en virkelig sød historie <3

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Ons sep 03, 2008 7:00 pm

Super godt skrevet! :b mere snart Razz
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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Lør sep 06, 2008 10:57 am

Så får I lige et nyt afsnit Very Happy

Håber I kan lide det Razz ?

Chapter 3

Harry was lying in his bed with his eyes closed. He could still feel Hannah’s touch from today’s dance lessons, her soft touch on his back and her hand in his. He never wanted those moments to end. What the hell what he thinking? His girlfriend is on her way over, and here he was, thinking about some one else. He needed to stop this, thinking about Hannah was a bad idea and he knew it. He was with Tiana, and had been for almost 5 months.
Harry heard a knock on the door and got up. As he was about to grab the doorknob, the door was swung open and Tiana entered. She was wearing almost nothing. Her tiny denim shorts and her small top were just too revealing. Harry knew she had an amazing body, everyone knew that. But she didn’t have to show it of like that.
“Hey Harry-boo!” she squealed and kissed him.
“Hi Tiana!” Harry tried to sound as exited as she was. “How was your day?” he asked.
“So, what should we do? She asked. Apparently Tiana didn’t want to talk.
“We could just talk or maybe watch a movie?”
“Yeah, a movie sounds great.” Tiana sat on Harry’s bed with her long legs crossed. Harry started a DVD and sat next to her.

Hannah was alone in her room. She had enjoyed the day, even though she had to dance with Harry. She didn’t really like the way he kept staring at her. It made her a little uncomfortable. But Hannah enjoyed dancing which made the whole situation better.
Hannah logged on MSN and opened a chat room with Sydney. They were about to share the daily gossip.

H: Hey sugar-pie!
S: Hello McSweetie (:
H: So, who are you dance partner?
S: TOM!!
H: Are you serious? That’s great.
S: Yeah, he’s so cute. And SINGLE!
H: Then go for it, babe.
S: Oh, I will lol. What about you?
H: Judd..
S: Oh, that’s a bit crappy. But..
H: Tell me about it! But what?
S: Why don’t you go for it? Wink Maybe he’s a nice guy?
H: OMG, how can you even say that?!
S: Well, I just think that..
H: I’m gonna go now, sweets. See you tomorrow! <3

Hannah immediately signed off; she didn’t want to see Sydney’s answer. Their conversation made her uncomfortable, why would Sydney even say something like that? Harry Judd was just someone who took girls for granted. They had never even talked before, they were just dance partners and that’s the way it was supposed to be.
Hannah took a hot shower, trying to wash their conversation off. It helped a little. She let her dark hair air dry, which gave her beautiful wavy curls. Compared to other people with curls, Hannah loved hers. She loved that way; her hair wasn’t straight and boring like some girls’. As she was sitting in front of her mirror, just watching her self, she realised that maybe Sydney was right. Maybe she was just a little bit pretty. Her blue eyes and her chocolate brown hair was a perfect fit. Hannah got up from the chair, walked across her room and opened her closet. In the back she found a beautiful dress. She had found it in a store a couple of weeks ago, but had never gotten a chance to wear it. She put it on, it shaped her body perfectly. She pressed play on her stereo and started dancing so the music.

Harry and Tiana were still lying on his bed. Tiana kept moving closer to Harry and suddenly she was on top of him, kissing him. Harry kissed back, but then a thought came to his mind: What would it be like to kiss Hannah? To feel her lips against his? Just to hold her in his arms?
He couldn’t take this anymore and pulled away.
“What?” Tiana asked a bit frustrated.
“I can’t do this anymore..” Harry sighed.
“I though this was what you wanted, but we can just watch the movie instead.”
“Tiana, that wasn’t what I meant. I can’t do this” Harry pointed at them both back and forth “..Anymore”
“What?!” Tiana almost yelled and stood up.
“I wanna break up..” Harry looked into her eyes.
“Well, you got what you wanted. I’m out of here!” She immediately turned around and slammed the door behind her. Harry let out a huge sigh and let himself fall to his bed.
After just lying on his bed for a while, Harry got up and decided to go for a walk.
It was a cold evening and Harry was freezing. He walked around, not really knowing where to go. He looked into the gardens he passed by. Suddenly he was in a street he had never been in before. A house caught his eye. Well, not the house specifically, it was more what he saw through one of the windows on the second floor. Harry stopped in front of the house, just looking at the person inside. It was a girl, dancing around. She suddenly stopped and looked out the window. Their eyes met in a gaze and soon Harry realised that it was Hannah.

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Lør sep 06, 2008 11:43 am

Rigtig godt skrevet .. Og virkelig godt afsnit .. Razz

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Lør sep 06, 2008 12:42 pm

Dannys-Princess skrev:
Rigtig godt skrevet .. Og virkelig godt afsnit .. Razz


Iih, mange tak Very Happy

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn sep 07, 2008 1:31 pm

ja det er super godt :b mere snart.
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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn sep 07, 2008 1:40 pm

mcflys skrev:
ja det er super godt :b mere snart.


Tak tak Very Happy efter 'planen' får I mere på onsdag, på min fødselsdag, haha cheers

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn sep 07, 2008 2:22 pm

Årh godt afsnit Very Happy
- Slutningen var helt perfekt, haha.
Jeg glæder mig til mere annesteg.

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn sep 07, 2008 2:32 pm

sarahXlovesXmcfly skrev:
Årh godt afsnit Very Happy
- Slutningen var helt perfekt, haha.
Jeg glæder mig til mere annesteg.


Haha, det var godt Very Happy
Og mange tak Razz

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IndlægEmne: Re: The Unexpected   Søn sep 07, 2008 3:50 pm

Synes også det var rigtig godt skrevet, og glæder mig til mere !!! Very Happy

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