Christine's fan fiction

jonesy · Emne: Christine's fan fiction Tors jul 30, 2009 11:54 pm

helløj everybody! jeg har altså også gået og puslet lidt med en Fiction her på det sidste, og vil meget gerne have alle jer til at læse den, men det er bare lige at jeg vil høre jer om? for jeg ved der er gang i en tre-fire stykker herinde allerede, og jeg vil ikke poste den for ingenting. så vil gerne læse endnu en(:?

Mette (: · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 1:20 am

ja det vil jeg gerne Very Happy

jonesy · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 1:21 am

Mette (: skrev:

ja det vil jeg gerne Very Happy

weeh! én hel læser(: flower

tark mette king

Mille · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 1:29 am

jeg er i alt fald klar !
:-D

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Always look on the briiiiight side of life ! xD
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Fic : "Viva La Vida"

jonesy · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 1:33 am

Mille skrev:

jeg er i alt fald klar !
:-D

jaa, så er der to!
tror jeg poster første kapitel i morgen så(:
be prepared my two readers(:

Mette (: · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 1:36 am

jonesy skrev:

Mille skrev:

jeg er i alt fald klar !
:-D

jaa, så er der to!
tror jeg poster første kapitel i morgen så(:
be prepared my two readers(:

haha i am really! Very Happy

<3

Mille · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 2:01 am

jonesy skrev:

Mille skrev:

jeg er i alt fald klar !
:-D

jaa, så er der to!
tror jeg poster første kapitel i morgen så(:
be prepared my two readers(:

I will be prepared for it ! Very Happy

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McFly <33
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Always look on the briiiiight side of life ! xD
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Fic : "Viva La Vida"

jonesy · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 2:03 am

Mille skrev:

jonesy skrev:

Mille skrev:

jeg er i alt fald klar !
:-D

jaa, så er der to!
tror jeg poster første kapitel i morgen så(:
be prepared my two readers(:

I will be prepared for it ! Very Happy

YAHOOOOOO(:

jonesy · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 3:59 pm

Okay til mine to læsere(:
jeg vil meget meget meget gerne have kritik, bare kun den kunstruktive af slagsen.
og når i har læst, vil jeg også rigtig gerne have hvis i bare smider en lille kommentar om hvad i synes så jeg får noget feedback(:
and..erh...ENJOY flower

Beginning:
Two children are playing in a garden in north west England. If you look around in the middle class garden, you can see the most beautiful flowers in every color you could ever imagine. The girl is seven, and the boy, eight. "can we kiss now tooom?" the girl asked the boy with a cute-little-girly-voice "NO!" the boy shouted. "the priest has to say that we now are husband and wife first" he looked at the teddy in front of them. He acted like he was the priest; "You are now man and wife." he said with a deep and serious voice. The girl started laughing, but then the boy looked at her again with his big brown eyes. "now we can kiss," he said while he grinned. He leaned against the girl, and the kiss was like any other small childrens kiss… their lips only just touched, and the good old ’EEEEEEEWWWWW’ came from both he and she.
Tom's mother came at sight in the green front door. "Tom and Chris, it’s cookie time!!" she shouted with a big smile on her face. "YAY!" The girl said happily, and ran over to Tom's mum. Tom came running right behind her. Tom's mum looked at them, and then demanded, with a mummy voice: "Christine, let me see your hands love. Yours too Thomas." "are you sure you want to see them? because they are really dirty!’" the girl said giggling. "Chris?!?" Tom said looking evily at Christine. "oh yeah." she began and looked down, grinning "Tom said I wasn’t suppose to say that they were dirty, because then we have to wash our hands…" toms mum started laughing with a bell clear sound. "Tom, you’re a naughty naughty boy! Now go and wash your dirty hands, then you can get milk to the cookies.. ok?"

ved godt at det var kort, men det var altså bare begyndelsen, more up soon..
if you like it(:

Mille · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 4:12 pm

MER' MER' MER ! :-D

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McFly <33
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Always look on the briiiiight side of life ! xD
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Fic : "Viva La Vida"

jonesy · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 4:13 pm

Mille skrev:

MER' MER' MER ! :-D

jaaa!
første og eneste comment(:
and you likey likey(:?

Mille · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 4:23 pm

jonesy skrev:

Mille skrev:

MER' MER' MER ! :-D

jaaa!
første og eneste comment(:
and you likey likey(:?

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Ja mand !! Very Happy

Jeg vil ha mere !! Nu altså xD
Det lyder rigtig godt :-D

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McFly <33
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Always look on the briiiiight side of life ! xD
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Fic : "Viva La Vida"

jonesy · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 4:29 pm

Mille skrev:

jonesy skrev:

Mille skrev:

MER' MER' MER ! :-D

jaaa!
første og eneste comment(:
and you likey likey(:?

'
Ja mand !! Very Happy

Jeg vil ha mere !! Nu altså xD
Det lyder rigtig godt :-D

taktak(:
poster måske i aften eller i morgen så..
hvor najs med én læser xD!

Mille · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Fre jul 31, 2009 4:32 pm

jonesy skrev:

Mille skrev:

jonesy skrev:

Mille skrev:

MER' MER' MER ! :-D

jaaa!
første og eneste comment(:
and you likey likey(:?

'
Ja mand !! Very Happy

Jeg vil ha mere !! Nu altså xD
Det lyder rigtig godt :-D

taktak(:
poster måske i aften eller i morgen så..
hvor najs med én læser xD!

Hihi, glæder mig (;

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McFly <33
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Always look on the briiiiight side of life ! xD
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Fic : "Viva La Vida"

Annesteg · Emne: Re: Christine's fan fiction Lør aug 01, 2009 10:30 am

AAAWWWW!!!
Det var nok bare noget af det sødeste EVER Very Happy

- Elsker det allerede!

MER MER MER
(og det er så her jeg plejer at bryde ud i sang; for de meste "Vi vil ha' mer" xD

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